Thursday, July 29, 2010

Clarity of Night Reader's Choice voting begins

The deadline for the latest Clarity of Night flash fiction contest is past. The final score is 161 entries, with 74 of them making it into the finalist running. Now readers can continue to sort through their favorites and send in their votes for the top five. Here are the official rules:

  1. Contest participants are invited to vote for their top 5 favorite entries by emailing their votes to jevanswriter at yahoo dot com.
  2. Please vote by finalist number and list your votes from 1 to 5 with 1 being your top vote.
  3. I will award 5 points for your 1st vote, 4 points for your 2nd vote, 3 points for your 3rd, 2 points for your 4th, and 1 point for your 5th. If you submit fewer than 5 votes, I'll award the least number of votes possible for each choice (for example, if you vote for only 2 entries, I'll award 2 and 1 points, respectively).
  4. You may not vote for your own entry. Please specify your Night Owl Number at the beginning of your email.
  5. At the close of Readers' Choice Award voting, I will tally the points. The winner will be the entry with the most points.
  6. I reserve the right to award additional Readers' Choice Awards with or without prizes.
Cast your votes before Monday, August 2nd, at 8:00 p.m. Eastern Time (U.S.).

If you'd like to vote for me, my entry, titled "The Care and Feeding of Angels," is Finalist #9. Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read it and posted such generous comments. Good luck to all the entrants.

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Friday, July 23, 2010

Now chirping on Twitter

I just created a Twitter account. Not sure why, but I feel oddly about this. Not like I sold my soul or anything. Lots of people tweet, just like lots of folks blog or update their Facebook pages. Maybe it's the newness of it for me, or the fear that I'll eventually abuse the system and end up spamming nothing but obnoxious YouTube videos.

Well, until I reach that point, I'll be updating it with blog entries, my Speculative Fiction Examiner posts, and, hopefully, continued news on the agent and book situation.

So, yes. You can now find my profile under JRVogt. Perhaps I'll see you on there.

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Thursday, July 22, 2010

Sequels and the planning of them

A couple days ago, my agent --

Brief aside here. I'm still in that transition phase where, whenever I use the phrase "my agent," my mind pauses for a few seconds to check if I'm actually allowed to say that. Then, once I realize the answer is Yes, I have to do a little mental dance of glee before my brain actually lets me focus on whatever I was saying/writing before. (It's a mental dance because I don't want to freak out my coworkers)

It's kinda like when your significant other goes from being a girlfriend to fiancé to wife. Each time requires a vocabulary shift, and the neuron connections aren't quite crossing the gap.

So, yes...what was I talking about? Sequels. Right.

When I first decided to pursue being an author, I wondered if I could actually write a whole novel. After I hit that milestone and proved it wasn't beyond me, then I had the thought of: "Hey, almost every fantasy/sci-fi author out there has trilogies and such on the shelves. I wonder if I could manage three books in a row?" Picking up from the end of the first novel, I then proceeded to bash out two sequels. While these manuscripts will likely never see the light of day, it was a good experiment, a way to show myself I could do these things. That I could go through an entire story without getting stuck on rewriting the first three chapters over and over.

Since then, however, I haven't attempted any further sequels. I figured until I got an agent and sold a first book, it wouldn't be the wisest use of my time to worry about drafting out an entire series.

So my...agent (twitch) emailed the other day asking if I could write up a page synopsis of a sequel for the novel we're getting ready to shop around. It was another one of those moments where the situation become a bit more real to me. I realized, "Oh, right. Whenever this first book gets sold, the publisher might (hopefully) want more than one novel from me. Which means I need to be ready to deliver one."

Fortunately, while I haven't written sequels for prior manuscripts, it doesn't mean I stopped thinking about them, jotting down ideas or putting in subplots or characters that could be developed in further installments. I had a working title for the sequel, plus a general concept of what the plot would be about, so I sat down and pulled up my notes from the first story. Then I sifted through these, seeing what ideas I originally had that never got used, worldbuilding aspects I hadn't touched on, characters that never got a scene, etc. From there, it was surprisingly easy to flesh out my fledgling concept into a full page, detailing the main plot from beginning to end, which I then sent on to Scott. Not only that, but I could already see how events in the second book would lead into a third.

Thus a sequel, and potential series, is born. Now I just have to write the thing. Part of me is excited, because I can look back at my earlier years and say, "I did it then, I can certainly do it now." Another part of me is cautious because I know a lot of pitfalls are waiting in second novels. There's even something known as the Second Novel Curse. New challenges pop up, such as figuring out how to reintroduce readers to the world, explain events from the first book, or just dealing with the pressure of living up to the expectations the first book sets.

At the same time, some things will be easier. I won't have to spend as much time in my worldbuilding phase because a lot of that is already done. I know my main characters and won't have to spend half the novel figuring out their motives and personalities. And overall, I'm looking forward to plunging back into their world and seeing what new adventures are waiting.

A point to all this? Not a terribly focused one. Just taking a moment to pause and look around, get my bearings before marching onward. Words done need be writ.

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Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Clarity of Night flash fiction contest and free eBook

UPDATE: Woohoo! My entry made it into the 40's club. It's eligible for final voting here at #9, The Care and Feeding of Angels.

If you haven't gotten the notice by now, Jason Evans, of the Clarity of Night blog, is currently running his latest flash fiction contest. This contest is being held in conjunction with Stephen Parrish, who is releasing his debut novel, The Tavernier Stones.

Read here for the inspirational photo, pertinent contest instructions and prizes. Also, Jason is switching up the format a teensy bit. He scores entries according to a 0-45 point scale. Because of the volume of entries he is expecting, he is only going to post those which score at least 40 points. Mine is in, and now I just have to wait and see if it is considered worthy enough. You've got until July 28th to get your story submitted.

In related and fun news, there is a free eBook available which compiles all the winners of the past dozen Clarity of Night short fiction contests. I'm on the table of contents a few times, and it's great to go back and see all the old pictures and incredible stories everyone came up with. The eBook is available for download on the blog.

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Thursday, July 15, 2010

Win books with a squid!

Want to win a copy of China Mieville's Kraken and Jeff VanderMeer's The Third Bear? They are holding a contest over on SF Signal, but it's not a simple enter-your-name-into-a-drawing deal. No, they require a bit of an entry fee in the form of flexing your literary muscle. As they put it:

"Inspired by China Miéville's Amazon post on Five Underrated Literary Cephalopods, we're asking you to get creative..."

1. Leave a comment with your best example of a previously-unpublished, G-rated description of a fictional cephalopod. (Less than 100 words.)

2. Be sure to include your email address (which will not be published) so we may contact you for a mailing address in the event you should win.

3. The giveaway will end Wednesday, July 21st 2010 (8:00 PM U.S Eastern time). Jeff VanderMeer himself will pick the best description as he sees it, thus declaring the winner who be notified and announced shortly thereafter.


Mine's in the mix somewhere. Let me know if you post one so I can go check it out!

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Wednesday, July 14, 2010

Where do writers get their ideas? - Paul the Octopus

So, during the World Cup, how many of you ran across an article about Paul the Octopus, who, folks claim, predicted the outcome of eight World Cup final games? Here's a video of Paul picking Spain to defeat Netherlands.



Now they're saying that Paul has received more than $4.5 million in offers of endorsement, and could become a spokesoctopus for companies wanting to portray a more legitimate image for their services and products.

What more could you need for your next big novel or short story premise? We already know animals have hypersensitivity to natural disasters and the like. But what if they can really predict the future? Wall Street turned into a giant aquarium so fish and other sea critters can monitor stock market crashes. Entire divisions of the FBI and CIA turned into zoos with animals slapping tentacles and paws on maps to point out future terrorist attacks.

What else ya got? Go. Write. Now. Because Paul said so. All hail the octopus.

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Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Why World War II was poorly written

This is a particularly hilarious rant from blogger Squid314, and aptly demonstrates how truth is often stranger than fiction.

In this diatribe, Squid314 points out the various weak plot points, stereotypical villains and deus ex machina involved in the storytelling of World War II. Here's a short excerpt:

"I wouldn't even mind the lack of originality if they weren't so heavy-handed about it. Apparently we're supposed to believe that in the middle of the war the Germans attacked their allies the Russians, starting an unwinnable conflict on two fronts, just to show how sneaky and untrustworthy they could be? And that they diverted all their resources to use in making ever bigger and scarier death camps, even in the middle of a huge war? Real people just aren't that evil. And that's not even counting the part where as soon as the plot requires it, they instantly forget about all the racism nonsense and become best buddies with the definitely non-Aryan Japanese.

Not that the good guys are much better. Their leader, Churchill, appeared in a grand total of one episode before, where he was a bumbling general who suffered an embarrassing defeat to the Ottomans of all people in the Battle of Gallipoli. Now, all of a sudden, he's not only Prime Minister, he's not only a brilliant military commander, he's not only the greatest orator of the twentieth century who can convince the British to keep going against all odds, he's also a natural wit who is able to pull out hilarious one-liners practically on demand. I know he's supposed to be the hero, but it's not realistic unless you keep the guy at least vaguely human."

For the full rundown, click here.

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Thursday, July 08, 2010

Let the revisions begin

While fiddling with the initial scenes of a fledgling manuscript, I received a fun email. From Scott, my agent at Folio Literary Management. Thankfully, this confirmed that my conversation with him last week concerning representation wasn't a.) a prank or b.) a hallucination.

Phew.

The email contained some of Scott's starting thoughts on how to get the manuscript ready for submission to publishers. Also on board with the revision/polishing process is agent Rachel Vater, who provided some in-depth comments on various characters and plot points that could use clarification and consistency.

I've heard plenty of horror stories where authors get feedback from editors and/or agents where the author is asked to give a character a sex-change operation, turn a fantasy novel into a historical family drama, or translate the manuscript into Klingon (you know, so it can be marketed to an intergalactic audience). For my first taste of the process, though, I'm encouraged by the agents' insights into what revisions could give the story that much more oomph.

So, fledgling manuscript set aside for the moment, it's time to digest the feedback, figure out where to start and dig back in to the story.

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Tuesday, July 06, 2010

Clarity of Night contest ups the ante

For those who have participated in the Clarity of Night flash fiction contests before, you know how much fun it is and how incredibly diverse the entries are based on a single photograph. A new contest is in the works, and Jason Evans, the Clarity of Night moderator, has released the photo which is to be the inspiration for this contest's entries.

The photo is called Uncovered, and is being held in conjunction with author Stephen Parrish's new thriller novel, The Tavernier Stones, where a corpse is found clutching one of the lost Tavernier Stones, untold in beauty and legend. Here's the image:


So what are the stakes? 1st, 2nd and 3rd place will receive signed copies of the photograph, as well as $100, $50 and $35 in Amazon gift certificates, respectively.

The contest opens to entries Monday, July 19th, but you can start writing your 250-word entry right now. Looking forward to seeing what everyone comes up with! Now get a-writing.

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